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But Summer Doesn't

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There's a candle,
I lit every day,
There's a window,
I left open all winter,
the candle,
for the one I wished to stay,
little did she know,
I was still into her,

There's a breeze,
moving the flame,
it was just like she moved,
with elegance,
Theres a tease,
killing my flame,
such a shame,
killing my second chance.
the breeze killed the flame, what an easy metaphor I think I've fainted. 

but..... I'll make it up to whomever is watching me (now is your chance!) and of course to everyone who comes by my work on occasion (equally appreciated) 
Because I'm working on a song! like forrealsies this time, and its missing 4 lines... so if any of you feel like it ^^ you can fill it out and i'll be singing OUR song :) (here I have to state that you will not get paid haha but you WILL be Mentioned, mind me I'm just a poor student )

but that... I will upload when I feel like it ^^

Cheers guys, 

Stefan
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Livsya's avatar
Hey Stefan, this poem is beautiful, I love the stucture and the boldness of particular words. Loved it!